Still on my journey with my half-breed and his stubborn patron. Still loving them, which is great.
I’m a little stuck, though, in fixing Part Two of the book. Armed with new readers, they’re much tougher than my friends, but that’s a good thing, yes? 🙂 The issue seems to be that this part moves a too slow. I need to work on either upping the suspense or cut bits out. Trouble is, I’ve no idea what to do.
This Part is reserved for the protagonist girl and she’s not the sort that attracts action, so I’m at a loss as to what I can do to entice readers to stick with it. Gosh, I’ve so much problem with this girl.
But never mind, on a better note, my publication is up (well, was up on 11th August Everyday Weirdness, but I missed it). Here it is:
I hope you enjoy it!